I'm just beginning to dip into this fascinating mixture of memoir, record of Army life and poetry collection, but here is one poem that caught my eye right away. I am looking forward to reading the rest of this collection, and then reviewing it!
Learning to ride
Not long after my complaints
about the long walk to school
how everyone had one
so why couldn’t I
you came home one night
with a two-wheeler bike –
a Monarch (boy’s, second-hand)
front handbrake, rear pedal –
no bell, chain-guard or gears.
You bought it, no doubt
off a ‘for sale’ ad in the local rag
painted it fire-engine red
showed me how to use the pump
oil the chain, crank and hubs
told me to level the pedals
before I stood on one
straddled the cross bar
sat on the black saddle seat
while you palmed my back
steadied the handle bars
about the long walk to school
how everyone had one
so why couldn’t I
you came home one night
with a two-wheeler bike –
a Monarch (boy’s, second-hand)
front handbrake, rear pedal –
no bell, chain-guard or gears.
You bought it, no doubt
off a ‘for sale’ ad in the local rag
painted it fire-engine red
showed me how to use the pump
oil the chain, crank and hubs
told me to level the pedals
before I stood on one
straddled the cross bar
sat on the black saddle seat
while you palmed my back
steadied the handle bars
said to push with my feet –
one then the other – coaxed me
to steer straight, keep upright
as we practised setting off.
When I came a cropper
skinned my arms or knees
you painted them orange
set me up for another go
until I was able to wobble solo
up and down life’s street.
If only that were so.
Tim says: Very like my own experiences of learning to ride a bike (in my case, in Otatara, south of Invercargill) - until the brutal end.
one then the other – coaxed me
to steer straight, keep upright
as we practised setting off.
When I came a cropper
skinned my arms or knees
you painted them orange
set me up for another go
until I was able to wobble solo
up and down life’s street.
If only that were so.
Credit: "Learning to ride" by Keith Westwater is reproduced by permission of the author and the publisher, Mākaro Press, from Keith's new book No One Home (Mākaro Press, 2018).
Tim says: Very like my own experiences of learning to ride a bike (in my case, in Otatara, south of Invercargill) - until the brutal end.
