I'm just beginning to dip into this fascinating mixture of memoir, record of Army life and poetry collection, but here is one poem that caught my eye right away. I am looking forward to reading the rest of this collection, and then reviewing it!
Learning to ride
about the long walk to school
how everyone had one
so why couldn’t I
you came home one night
with a two-wheeler bike –
a Monarch (boy’s, second-hand)
front handbrake, rear pedal –
no bell, chain-guard or gears.
You bought it, no doubt
off a ‘for sale’ ad in the local rag
painted it fire-engine red
showed me how to use the pump
oil the chain, crank and hubs
told me to level the pedals
before I stood on one
straddled the cross bar
sat on the black saddle seat
while you palmed my back
steadied the handle bars
one then the other – coaxed me
to steer straight, keep upright
as we practised setting off.
When I came a cropper
skinned my arms or knees
you painted them orange
set me up for another go
until I was able to wobble solo
up and down life’s street.
If only that were so.
Tim says: Very like my own experiences of learning to ride a bike (in my case, in Otatara, south of Invercargill) - until the brutal end.
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