tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3264914780516321436.post941863108750425033..comments2023-10-21T21:54:39.121+13:00Comments on Tim Jones: Books in the Trees: Tuesday Poem: Losing WeightTim Joneshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14856414700019368658noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3264914780516321436.post-74238083509745238882010-09-22T08:44:14.983+12:002010-09-22T08:44:14.983+12:00Thank you, Helen, Renee, AJ and Kathleen. I'm ...Thank you, Helen, Renee, AJ and Kathleen. I'm glad you all liked the poem.<br /><br />Renee, I wonder whether Tim Powers had the legend at least partially im mind when he wrote "The Anubis Gates"?<br /><br />AJ, thanks for the science note - maybe I remembered that when I came up with the title, and then forgot!Tim Joneshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14856414700019368658noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3264914780516321436.post-70525843066989346462010-09-22T03:42:01.404+12:002010-09-22T03:42:01.404+12:00I loved the image of the moon as a plate of bone.I loved the image of the moon as a plate of bone.Kathleen Joneshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07645566938871914385noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3264914780516321436.post-67002867384309981892010-09-21T16:22:06.027+12:002010-09-21T16:22:06.027+12:00Nice. congrats.
Loved the poem - but then noticed...Nice. congrats.<br /><br />Loved the poem - but then noticed a comment - science geek says - unless you're counting a loss in fuel - losing weight IS correct - because weight includes gravity and mass doesn't.AJ Ponderhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15625252892255925438noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3264914780516321436.post-19779791246852363142010-09-21T15:52:22.310+12:002010-09-21T15:52:22.310+12:00This reminds me of the legend of the Moon maiden -...This reminds me of the legend of the Moon maiden - of which there are many versions. But one version has a selfish Empress stealing her husband's pill of immortality (which he had laboured many years with many wise men to find) and swallowing it, whereupon she floats to the moon, condemned to live there forever and look upon the earth that she loves.<br />(A feminist version I like better is that her husband is a cruel tyrant so she takes the pill in order to save her people).Renee Lianghttp://chinglish-renee.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3264914780516321436.post-81780494907902272802010-09-21T14:35:38.302+12:002010-09-21T14:35:38.302+12:00Fun stuff, Tim--I love the plays on meaning in bot...Fun stuff, Tim--I love the plays on meaning in both title and poem.Helen Lowehttp://helenlowe.info/blog/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3264914780516321436.post-32042599936007226572010-09-20T22:58:27.420+12:002010-09-20T22:58:27.420+12:00Thanks, Helen! I should have thought that the titl...Thanks, Helen! I should have thought that the title may be off-putting.<br /><br />From a scientific point of view, the poem should be called "Losing Mass", but that probably conjures up other connotations.<br /><br />The inspiration for this poem was a wonderful Tim Powers novel called "The Anubis Gates", in which one character, his lifespan greatly prolonged by magical means, is so repugnant to the Earth that he would float off it it not tethered to the ground.<br /><br /><a href="http://www.sfreviews.net/anubis_gates.html" rel="nofollow">The Anubis Gates</a> manages to incorporate time travel, quantum physics, Egyptian magic and 19th-century poetry in one seamless and amazing narrative. It's a great book!Tim Joneshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14856414700019368658noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3264914780516321436.post-77167959790638091012010-09-20T22:04:07.755+12:002010-09-20T22:04:07.755+12:00Cool! Despite the title, I knew it wouldn't be...Cool! Despite the title, I knew it wouldn't be a simple diet poem from you!Helen Rickerbyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10652318704387476082noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3264914780516321436.post-79187965057281334142010-09-20T21:47:44.862+12:002010-09-20T21:47:44.862+12:00There I was hoping for a secret! Good poem but I&...There I was hoping for a secret! Good poem but I'm still firmly tethered to Earth. : (Kayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04146863223323997793noreply@blogger.com