tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3264914780516321436.post402034066742232225..comments2023-10-21T21:54:39.121+13:00Comments on Tim Jones: Books in the Trees: Tuesday Poem: Riverton Beach Poem, by Mark PirieTim Joneshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14856414700019368658noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3264914780516321436.post-86212767945473920852015-03-07T00:40:45.760+13:002015-03-07T00:40:45.760+13:00Thanks, Helen, Madeleine, Penelope and Helen for y...Thanks, Helen, Madeleine, Penelope and Helen for your comments - and Penelope, I agree this would make an excellent concept for a book - I wonder whether it's ever been done?<br /><br />Regards<br />TimTim Joneshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14856414700019368658noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3264914780516321436.post-10554558469781931712015-03-06T20:56:26.761+13:002015-03-06T20:56:26.761+13:00Special poems both. Lovely to read.Special poems both. Lovely to read.Helen McKinlayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18429062682694815734noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3264914780516321436.post-1185516758471632632015-03-03T13:05:45.235+13:002015-03-03T13:05:45.235+13:00A lovely thing to have a poem written in response ...A lovely thing to have a poem written in response to your poem, Tim.<br /><br />A book written in such a way would be wonderful; almost like a work where there is a translation put next to an original poem written in another language.<br /><br />I think that responsive haiku is practised quite widely, both in Japan and by poets writing in English.Penelopehttp://pscottier.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3264914780516321436.post-65637324820819425552015-03-03T10:20:48.208+13:002015-03-03T10:20:48.208+13:00The poem.
Maybe a friend,
parent, or child.The poem.<br />Maybe a friend,<br />parent, or child.Madeleine Marie Slavickhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01801929694750498013noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3264914780516321436.post-31639850007021989712015-03-03T09:29:24.927+13:002015-03-03T09:29:24.927+13:00I love both these poems, Tim -- a fabulous 'to...I love both these poems, Tim -- a fabulous 'tone" to both.Helen Lowehttp://helenlowe.info/blog/noreply@blogger.com